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There's no such thing as online copywriting

Last post 10-22-2008, 6:50 AM by Craig Hanna. 10 replies.
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  •  05-23-2007, 9:17 AM 46

    There's no such thing as online copywriting

    I read and hear a lot about "online copywriting" being different somehow from print copy; but I am still trying to figure out what these sages of digiland mean.

    Given that the three most common pieces of "advice" these wise old souls impart are one, use a benefit-driven headline at the top of your page (duh!), two, address the reader directly (really, you don't say!), and three, use short sentences (er, sh*t sherlock, I never woulda thoughta that), you have to wonder whether they have ever read anything about copywriting full stop.

    What did they imagine people like me were doing before the advent of hypertext? Writing long boring sentences that weren't engaging the reader and with no headlines?

    I write 75% for online and 25% for print; and the techniques for the former, barring a little bit of hypertext cutesiness, are identical. It's called salesmanship on screen.

  •  05-23-2007, 12:02 PM 47 in reply to 46

    Re: There's no such thing as online copywriting

    Well, Claude, since you wrote one of the most famous early books on advertising, 'Scientific Advertising', your post is most welcome, coming, as it does, from so very far above us. Heaven. I am asuming you are the same?

    I agree with your points. Most marketing 'advice' we receive is pretty useless and old hat. But if I may add to your post, I have just completed a test that shows there is a significant way in which online copywriting should differ from print. That is, the typeface used.

    Which typeface should we use for online copy?
    Older direct mail hands know that a serif typeface pulls in more response than a sans serif typeface. That is why we use Courier for a sales letter and Times for a brochure for example. But after lots of enquiries, including the UKs top DM expert, Drayton Bird and the best that SIPA USA have on their books, it appears there have been no published tests on response to various online typefaces. So I ran a double-blind test to my own online subscribers and the sans serif face pulled significantly better than a serif face.

    I will put another post elsewhere on this site on another topic, because I love forums. But I won't be giving away this kind of money-making info all the time. This is just a free gift to get y'all interested in contributing to what could be a great place to swap information.

    Well done James.

    Peter Hobday

    Peter Hobday
    Copywriter / Marketing consultant
    Publisher: Subscriptions Strategy newsletter
    http://www.subscriptionsStrategy.co.uk
  •  05-23-2007, 1:54 PM 49 in reply to 46

    Re: There's no such thing as online copywriting

    Peter, I'd have to agree with your point on typefaces.

    Believe it or not, the British Standards Institution did some research on this very subject and developed a training course which I sat in on (from above, of course!).

    Their conclusion: the single pixels needed for serifs act as drifting dust on the screen, making the text harder to read.

  •  05-23-2007, 3:02 PM 52 in reply to 49

    Re: There's no such thing as online copywriting

    Claude - I would be very interested in seeing the research, the type of lists the test was conducted on and what the response figures to each segment were.

    I am always happy to publish this kind of material in the Subscriptions Strategy newsletter and in my In Circulation articles. I know there are some people who could make use of it.



    Peter Hobday
    Copywriter / Marketing consultant
    Publisher: Subscriptions Strategy newsletter
    http://www.subscriptionsStrategy.co.uk
  •  05-28-2007, 3:30 PM 67 in reply to 47

    Re: There's no such thing as online copywriting

    Have to say that I am a firm believer in a navy blue arial typeface which looks as though it is one to one and personal to the person I am addressing. That way I can write

    Dear John

    I thought this would be of interest to you... and hope vaguley that John thinks it is personal to him. On the same basis I shy away from alot of logos and design because that online looks like spam.

    I have never tested this. Why not? Useless amateur...

      

  •  05-28-2007, 4:30 PM 71 in reply to 67

    Re: There's no such thing as online copywriting

    Max - There is lots of theory around, so that is why I did a proper test to my list. The full results will be published in around two months time.

    This kind of topic is fundamental to profitable marketing. Which is why it's of little interest to anyone. Marketing people get paid the same as circulation people and are virtually ignored.

    By the way, I have to ask: What kind of car do you drive Madmax?

    Peter

    Peter Hobday
    Copywriter / Marketing consultant
    Publisher: Subscriptions Strategy newsletter
    http://www.subscriptionsStrategy.co.uk
  •  05-29-2007, 10:41 AM 75 in reply to 71

    Re: There's no such thing as online copywriting

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  •  08-30-2007, 1:58 PM 173 in reply to 46

    Re: There's no such thing as online copywriting

    Hi Claude,

     

    My background is online (site development, particularly magazines) and I can think of a number of reasons why online copywriting should be treated differently.

     

    Speed - because it is more difficult to read online and consequently people read much slower (Jakob Nilesen’s reserach suggests 25% slower), you have to make the text work harder than you would in print to achieve the same effect.  Because it is harder to read online, and people have to scroll, it is more difficult to skim text, the structure of the page should account for this.  People reading slower means they read less, which means you need to get the point across in fewer words. 

     

    By the same rationale people will only read shorter pieces in full, the recommendation is to break the text into several relavant pieces using good anchors, rather than one long journal article - you have a higher chance that more people will read the relevant section then.  Research suggests 80% of people will not read a journal article in full online, most will scan, and print it to read it if they are interested, the pages and sections of a longer article should therefore be structured to enable scanning, different use of titles, different use of bulleted lists, putting the point of a paragraph first, packing the 'viewable area' on each page etc http://psychology.wichita.edu/surl/usabilitynews/62/online_reading_survey.htm  (interestingly different content types and length have very different reading patterns).

     

    Context - online people click back and forwards and scroll up and down seeing only a limited part of the page at any moment, they do no have the same context that they do in print (to other pages, articles etc).  The copy online needs to give that context, a title, for example, should work out of context (more on that below).  Research suggest that people spend more time orientating themselves online (part context, part quantity of search results, part navigation structure)  this means a quick verification is required to reassure the user thay have the right page / information (accepting they cannot skim as effectively), the structure of the online copy should support that reassurance (better, clearer contextual anchors etc), this is why shorter paragraphs, more titles that are more descriptive are recommended and packing the 'viewable area' at the top of the page.

     

    Site structure - people do not have the same sense of context when online (as in a magazine, with its clear sections and index), they look for titles, verbal cues and relationships with other content to give them context and endorse the content. Consider that people do not navigate a site 'top-down', they do not start at the front cover like they would in a book, most users will be deep linked to an article from a search result (which in itself needs careful language consideration), ideally the structure of the article would reassure them of the page significanace (consider deep linking into the middle of a book chapter, for example). 

     

    Hypertext - and words as labels (not just hypertext), they are a navigational contruct online and should be given very careful consideration - teasers are ofen used as navigational constructs from home / section pages, for example.  Likewise people will not actually 'read'an article until they are staisfied they have the right content, and they identify that in a completely different way to print, it therefore requires different treatment.

     

    Search engines - use algoritms to analyse page copy, keyword density, word proximity, use of headings, titles and styles to determine content relevance.  In order to gain position, and therefore enhance traffic these should be given consideration, consideration one would not make in print.

     

    Would be very interested to hear other people’s opinions on this, especially if people have research in the area.

     

    angus

     


    Angus Phillipson
    WORKSsitebuilder

    W: www.workssitebuilder.co.uk
  •  10-24-2007, 9:29 AM 212 in reply to 173

    Re: There's no such thing as online copywriting

    Further to my previuos post I thought others might find this useful;

    http://www.useit.com/alertbox/passive-voice.html

    regards

    angus


    Angus Phillipson
    WORKSsitebuilder

    W: www.workssitebuilder.co.uk
  •  10-22-2008, 6:50 AM 328 in reply to 173

    Re: There's no such thing as online copywriting

    Great post Angus and clearly shows how misinformed Claude is about the online channel.

    We run training courses and online copywriting (www.e-consultancy.com/training) and we always start from the premise that good writing/journalism is still at the heart of all good copy, its just that the chanel has unique atributes which must be taken seriously.

    Craig

     

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